I like the structure and rythm of this poem. I think maybe you should have used "I" instead of "we" in the last line. I was able to relate to the poem without the word "we" in the end. I would have used the letter "I" to make it seem as if the author is the martyr.
My favorite part is the last word and i think it sums up a lot in the poem. I like when a single word can be powerful.
ReplyDeleteJohn Rutherford
I like the structure and rythm of this poem. I think maybe you should have used "I" instead of "we" in the last line. I was able to relate to the poem without the word "we" in the end. I would have used the letter "I" to make it seem as if the author is the martyr.
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